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Post by Kyuudaime on Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:16 pm

Name: Kyuudaime ( Jin Onaga)

Age: 34

Gender: Male

Village: Hidden Village of the Sand

Ninja Rank: Kazekage

Clan: N/A

Looks:

Personality: Kyuudaime is a calm leader and strong willed individual. He doesn't like to be the starter of feuds. But he will definetly end one.

Special Characteristics: Ability to use Sand

Elements: Fire, Earth

Skills/Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu

Jutsus:




Gokusamaiso (Prison Sand Burial)
Rank: B
Description: The ground quickly loosens below the opponent and causes everything in the area to completely sink hundreds of meters deep within the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure on the opponent will immobilize their ability to even move a finger.

Ryusa Bakuryu (Quicksand in the Style of a Waterfall)
Rank: A
Description: This technique moves sand in the likeness of an ocean wave towards the enemy, covering and "drowning" them in an ocean of sand.

Sabaku Fuyu (Desert Suspension)
Rank: D
Description: Jin, using the sand that he carries on his back, is simply able to stay afloat up in the air with the sand he controls at his will.

Sabaku Kyu (The Coffin of Crushing Sand)
Rank: B
Description: This Jutsu uses sand to grab the opponent and cover their entire body. This skill is primarily utilised for apprehending an opponent immobile, but can kill the opponent by suffocation or by being followed with the Sabaku Sōsō.

Sabaku Soso (Imploding Sand Funeral)
Rank: A
Description: Through the will of the user, the sand already wrapping a target because of Sabaku Kyū will implode and crush whatever is within. When used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time to feel pain. Jin crush's the opponent with just Sabaku Kyū, without any sign of using Sabaku Sōsō, perhaps implying that Sabaku Kyū itself has its own crushing effect.

Sabaku Taiso (Desert Imperial Funeral)
Rank: A
Description: Following the Ryūsa Bakuryū, it compacts the sand thus crushing the enemies in a huge amount of sand. It makes it so it will rain blood.

Sabakuro (Desert Prison)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu uses sand to imprison the victim.

Suna Bunshin (Sand Replication)
Rank: C
Description: Creates an identical copy of Jin, except in sand form. When it is attacked, it does not disappear like other regular clone techniques. Instead, it can transform parts of itself back into sand in order to snag and attack the opponent. This makes it one of the strongest and most advanced types of clones. Only after it is damaged enough to the point of destruction, it takes on the form and appearance of regular sand.

Suna no Yoroi (Armour of Sand)
Rank: C
Description: This jutsu uses chakra to cover the user with a thin, but very dense, layer of protective sand. While a good defense, it puts an unignorable burden on the user's stamina, both through chakra absorption and the fact that the sand makes them heavier and hampers their movement.

Suna Raishin (Thunder God of Sand)
Rank: A
Description: Jin creates several lightning rods made of sand and spread them through the battlefield. Once they are activated, the rods absorbs any eletricity nearby and use it to shock the enemy.

Third Eye
Type: C
Range: Long
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Sand (Neo-Suna)
This jutsu creates a floating eyeball out of sand that is connected to the optic nerves. The user can control the size of the eye depending on its use. Its main purpose is spying, since it can form and disperse in at far distances on command


Sand Nimbus Cloud
Rank: C
Range: under user
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sand (Neo-Suna)

Sand Nimbus Cloud is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Sand ninja. Using the ability to levitate sand, the user will bring together sand into cloud shape clumps. These clumps are dense enough for a Suna ninja to rest on. This can allow the user to rise above any threat from below.


Name: Sand Manipulation
Rank: C
Range: Close
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sand (is a Neo-Suna basic technique)

Description: A basic ability learned by the ninja of Neo-Suna, this technique allows the user to temporarily manipulate sand, forming weapons, armor, or projectiles, for his use.

Name: Suna Shuriken no Jutsu ("Sand Shuriken Technique")
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Sand
Clan: None

Description: With this jutsu, the user gathers sand from his surroundings in order to shape it into a shuriken, which the user can hurl at the opponent by using chakra. The size of the shuriken and its range depends on the quantity of chakra invested on this maneuver.

Chuunin

Name: Doujou Kirikae (Soil Conversion Technique)
Rank: B
Range: Close
Jutsu Type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Suna
Description: After mastering the appropriate stages, the user is able to use sand techniques by converting soil into sand for the duration of the technique. This does however take quiet a bit of chakra and time to complete. Though, it has proved invaluable to the Village Hidden in the Sand.


Name: Suna Yadama Ooikakusu (Sand Projectile Coat)
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Jutsu Type: Supplementary
Elemental Affinity: Suna
Description: Before releasing a projectile such as a kunai or shuriken, the user first coats it with a thin layer of sand. The main purpose of this is to get sand within a wound when the projectile strikes, inflicting extra pain to distract the enemy.


Name: Suna Tsume (Sand Claws)
Rank: C
Range: Close
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Suna
Description: Coating their hands and forearms with sand, the user expels chakra to harden and lengthen the sand to create claw like gauntlets on each arm. They make good offensive weapons as they allow the user to make swiping attacks towards an enemy, or try and disarm a weapon wielding foe, while at the same time providing excellent protection for the hands and upper arm against bladed weaponry. The gloves can last up to two posts though the user can dispel them any time they wish by simply releasing the chakra holding the sand together.


Name: Suna Taihou (Sand Cannon Technique)
Rank: B
Range: Medium
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Suna
Description: Channelling chakra up their throat, the user forms a great deal of chakra in their mouth that they can then expel forcibly from their mouth at a target. The stream of sand is strong enough to knock down an enemy if they catch the brunt of it, and if the target in question is unfortunate enough to be pinned in place by it, serious injury can result due to the pressure, and even glancing strikes can have effects similar to a solid punch.


Name: Suna Shigure (Sand Shower)
Rank: B
Range: Medium
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Suna
Description: The user lifts a considerable amount of sand into the air and rains it down upon his enemy. However the sand will clump together, resulting in each drop being about the size of an average hailstone. If the enemy does not get out of the area affected the bombarding hailstone shaped sand can cause serious bruising and be quite painful. The speed at which the sand drops will fall is based on the users control.

Name: Haijin Inpei no Jutsu Ė Concealing Ash Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: n/a
Description: a Ninjutsu Technique utilized by Kasai shinobi. After forming the necessary hand seals, the area around the userís target will begin to be surrounded by sweltering heat and thick drifting ash like that out of a volcano. The ninja will then use the low visibility to enhance their chances on landing successful attack as well as use the heat to fatigue their opponent quicker. This technique requires almost the full concentration of the userís chakra and if any other technique is used, it is dispelled immediately


Name: Daiennetsu Genko - Hell-Fist
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity: n/a
Description: a Taijutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The user will first focus chakra into their hands, and concentrates it into actual flame around their fists. This is normally a difficult task, but skill in Ninjutsu makes it easier. The fire is used to add burning damage to the user's taijutsu strikes, as well as allowing them harm the opponent through certain kinds of armor.


Name: Katon: Guren - Crimson Lotus Flower
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Description: Rotating a larger weapon such as a staff or umbrella above their head, the user begins to gather flames into a ring of flames. They must use their weapon to distance themselves from the gathering flames, as attempting to hold the flames within their hands will result in severe burns. After gathering roughly a six-foot disc of pure fire, the Ninja releases the blazing wheel towards their target.


Name: Rekka Kabe no Jutsu - Conflagration Wall Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel a large burst of flames from their body. The fire will surround the user and close allies and move at a high rate of speed forming a protective wall vortex. The vortex's heat is strong enough to destroy incoming attacks. The vortex can be disrupted if doused with water or if sufficient explosive force is expended outside the protective shell.


Name: Kazanbai Bunshin no Jutsu - Volcanic Ash Clone
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a copy of himself or herself from the extra dust or ash on the ground. This clone is stronger then typical bunshin in that it actually has substance and therefore can take one or two hits before dispelling. Dispelling the clones, however, does not always result in victory and is not always the best idea. When the Kazanbai Bunshin dispels it explodes into a shower of hot ash and gases that can start fires and blind anyone standing too close.


Name: Kuitsukusu Shounetsujigoku - Consuming Inferno
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Teamwork Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. One user makes a Chakra Hinin Heki around the target. The orb is usually just a few feet across. The other user will place his hand in the field before it is finalized and then uses Shounetsujigoku Hou inside the ball, instantly nuking whatever was inside and burning it so badly that no evidence remains. This is how Kasai deals with things that other villages would want to know. It's a slightly time-consuming process, so it's not good against a struggling opponent. It's used mainly to eradicate bodies that we don't want other people getting a hold of.


Name: Kazanbai Bunshin Daibakuha - Volcanic Ash Clone Great Explosion
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Fire
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing Fire chakra and a Kazanbai Bunshin. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kazanbai Bunshin, but the ninja can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion of hot ash and embers. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.


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Post by Kyuudaime on Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:18 pm

Jutsus:

Technique Level 1:

Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique): Rank D Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a substanceless copy of the ninja. The copy serves can serve as a distraction or as means to confuse their opponent. As soon the the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with the opponent, they will disappear in a puff of smoke. The bunshins cannot talk.

Henge no Jutsu (Transform Skill): Rank D
Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to tranform themself into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Technique Level 2:

Sakuhouhea (Hair Rope): Rank D
The user of this technique must lose a lot of hair first, or somehow have hair in there inventory. They drop the hair to the ground, near the opponents feet, and while the opponent is confused by this, uses chakra to wrap it around the opponents feat, stopping them from moving.

Kontserun Henge no Jutsu (Combined Transformation Technique): Rank D
In this technique, two ninja's may use there Henge no Jutsu technique to seem like that the two ninja's are one person.

Karuto no Tayori (Information Cards): Rank D
A very unique technique, the ninja using this technique must have a deck of speical cards. Using the cards and there own ability, the user of this technique is able to gather information from almost any ninja from any country.

Utsusemi no Jutsu (Projection Technique): Rank D
With this technique, the user uses the chakra to throw there voice, making it seem like they could be anywere, while still letting the opponent hear them.

Technique Level 3:

Bakuretsufuu (exploding seal): Rank C
A Fuuinjutsu (sealing technique) where a seal is written on a piece of seal paper (must use a seal paper) to make the paper create an explosion. This technique is usually used by throwing a kunai or shuriken with the seal paper (with the seal wriiten on it of course) attached on to it.

Hien (flying swallow): Rank C
Using chakra to extend the blades of any weapons, the user charges the opponent. The enemy will dodge by going to a distance that they think the weapon won't be able to hit them but the chakra will cut the surprised enemy.


Shouhekifuu (barrier seal):Rank C
A Ninjutsu technique where the exploding seals are set on the ground in a formation around yourself so that when an enemy comes all the seals will explode , making sure the enemy cannot escape death. (requires bakuretsufuu)

Technique Level 4:

Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique): Rank C The ninja will disapear and reapear in a way so that their opponent can't see. However, this technique usually requires a type of cover. For instance, sand, leaves, rain, or mist. Can only be used on opponents who's speed is 2 lower than the users.


Togeyomi (Underworld Spines): Rank C: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja pours chakra into their hair to create a thick, spiky coat that will pierce through an enemy's flesh if they attack. This hair can be swung erratically, if long enough, as an offensive attack as well.


Technique Level 5:


Soshuha (Manipulating Attack Blades): Rank B: Blades are held in the air by chakra and directed towards their target. They can only be held around 10m (approx. 33 feet) away from the opponent.


Technique Level 6:

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique): Rank B:
This technique is hard to master, because the chakra of the user needs to be equally distributed and used with effectiveness. Also, the strength of the user is equally divided among the clones, which makes it hard for someone to distinguish the original one. Shadow clones disappear once they are hit though, but they can be made in large numbers so they last longer. A weak ninja can create many clones but weak ones; a strong one and one that practices this Jutsu a lot can create large quantities of strong clones. Kage Bunshin can only use Henge no Jutsu. There is a limit on the amount of Kage Bunshin that can be made.


Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique): Rank B:
Like the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique), this Ninjutsu technique requires a base from which to clone. Therefore, the ninja performing this throws a single shuriken at their enemy, and then performs the jutsu, creating one or many more shadow shuriken, which will then continue the path of the original shuriken. A devastating technique that is almost impossible to block or evade.



Technique Level 7:

Bakuretsu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Exploding Shadow Clone Technique): Rank A:
A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a suicidal Kage Bunshin (shadow clone). After creating it, the ninja can cause the clone to remotely detonate and explode in combat, taking anyone immediately surrounding it out. When used in close combat, without the enemy noticing, this technique can be quite deadly. Requires Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.


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Post by Kyuudaime on Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:26 pm

History/Background Story: Jin Onaga was born in the Hidden Sand Village. His family were all Sand Shinobi, so it was apparent that he to would partake the family traditions become a Sand Shinobi. His mother, father, and brother did what they could to make their youngest kin a Ninja. Then came the time where Jin entered the Sand Ninja Academy. There he was a noted achiever, passing all his tests most admirably, leaving his Academy Teachers impressed. But Jin knew this was nothing to be to happy about. He knew that his journey to be great a Shinobi it would take more than comforting words and test assignments to put him on his way. But soon on Jin graduated the Academy and became a Genin. Finally able to put a Ninja headband on finalizing his journey to becoming a Shinobi. Jin goals were going good. Till something terrible happened.

Returning from a particularly difficult training session he stepped into his house to find his Mother and his Father huddled closely mourning over something he knew not. "Whats wrong. What happened!" He hissed. Fearing the answer even as it left his mouth.

"You brother was killed on a mission, and they haven't recovered his body-"

But that was all his father was able to say before he was overcome with grief again. His mother and father didn't see Jin running out of the house, with tears streaming from his eyes. There he huddled in a nearby alley. Where the same thought began to repeat in his head. I'll never let this happen again. And from then out Jin never really let many people get to close to him. But this tragedy only fortified his hold to become a great Shinobi. To protect the ones he cared about. And to also to protect his Village.

He would soon then began rising through the ranks. First becoming a Chuunin at the age of 19. He then went on perilous missions proving his worth to the Sand Village more and more. The Council came before him and they personally made him a Jounin at the age of 27.

Even then after his promotion to Jounin. He still completed all his missions without fail and he was now a hero amongst his peers. Then the last Kazekage retired and chose him to be the successor. Jin took this honor and became the new Kazekage at the age of 34. Where he leads his people with pride and dignity. And his will to protect his people was strong.

Roleplay Sample: Jin dared to breath as he leaned silently on the tree. Somewhere was the enemy. But he could not tell where he was. The wind picked up speed as it sped wildly through his hair, edging the sweat into his eyes. He raised his hand to wipe his brow, being careful not to cut himself with the Kunai in his hand. Then he heard it. A slight rustle within the trees above him. He looked up expecting the worse. But it turned out to be a sparrow. Jin sighed with relief as he leaned back on the tree. But as he did. Someone leaned up to him from behind the tree and muttered a single phrase. "Die."
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Re: Kyuudaime -[Approved]-UI-TK-

Post by Itachi Uchiha on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:27 pm

We don't allow people to have Hiraishin no Jutsu (Flying Thunder God Technique):Rank A: so please remove it.

Please removed these also.

Shoten no Jutsu (Shapeshifting Technique): Rank B:

Kongou Nyoi (Diamond Staff): Rank B: You need Enma to use this jutsu.


Shushagan no Jutsu (Vanishing Facial Copy Technique): Rank B:

Choju Giga (Super Beasts Imitation Picture):

Kyuushu no Chakra (chakra drainer technique): Rank C

Sabaki no Genki (energy drainer technique): Rank C

Name: Shounetsujigoku Hou - Inferno Release
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The user focuses as much fire energy as they can into their body, then expels it suddenly with as much force as they can. This blasts everything in the area with an intense wave of fire, burning clothes and small sticks, but not lasting long enough to cause permanent damage. Releasing the fire through a single hand in a conical blast can also focus this technique, although this requires lots of concentration. After performing this technique, the user will be fatigued and unable to use Fire jutsu for some time.

This is elemental manipulation right? ^

Name: Chakra Hinin Heki - Chakra Denial Barrier
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user gathers their chakra into their palm, extending it then outward in a conical shape. This requires intense focus, and the ninja cannot do anything else during this time. Once the target area is surrounded in chakra, the chakra collapses around them, and solidified into an orb. This orb cannot be broken, but drains a massive amount of chakra and doesnít allow many elemental attacks to escape.

No one can really manipulate chakra like this^. So i can't allow it.

Futon: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa
Rank: A
Description: The user spews a large amount of sand from the mouth, that covers a large area. The sand strikes the opponent, and devastates both the enemy and a large area around him.

Make these changes and your good to go.
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Post by Kyuudaime on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:42 pm

Fixed
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Post by Toshiro Azibara Kazura on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:47 pm

Also, Sand is not an Element, Change it to Earth
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Post by Kyuudaime on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:54 pm

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Post by Toshiro Azibara Kazura on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:59 pm

So far so good, i guess i need an Opinion By Itachi, Okay, Then your approved.
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Post by Itachi Uchiha on Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:03 pm

He's good to go now.

Approved.
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Post by Toshiro Azibara Kazura on Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:04 pm

I'll move him...
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